Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬,同时能较准确地使用高级词汇;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒。
With the development of economy,the internet play an important role in our daily life.mobile phone is becoming habit. On the past,we can communication by letter and face-to-face.Nowadays,we can also get along with mobile phone.howevers,as if we just feel accustomed to talk with people through texts and images on the mobile phone.sometimes,when we face to each other,we can’t say much words like on the mobile phone.on my view,it could be paid attention to.because of face-to-face is essential for us. All in all,we can not noly talk on the phone but also by face to face and letter.Nonetheless,we can’t rely on the mobile phone.face to face can more increasely our feelings.So,it can be used for our work and life.Nevertheless,we also use face to face to improve our feelings.