2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

nowadays,computers play a important role in our life ,we were able to do many things in computer,such as play game or read books.everyone knows that computer is very useful. nevertheless ever thing have two defects. with more and more people have computers,it is a fact that computers occupys our life time.some of us can not doing things without computers even that its can effects our work and bisness.some students don't go to class because of play games. form my perspective,only find a right way to use computer can we benifit from computer.