2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Yestoday,my foreign friend came to China and want to visit my hometown with me.My hometown is Changsha where is extremely beautiful!Changsha have numerous place where become famours . First and foremost,I may be going to Fire Palace for fantanstic food with him. It will be marvelous for him that diference beteewn China and himself nation.Next,Yuelu mantains and Juzi island have become symbolization at Changsha,so,I must take him to there.Last, Jinggang hometown is distinguish and has a long historic,since reserve a mass of traditional conventions.And we can experience unique and distinct life from locationg life. Changsha is not only above these places,but also numerous place is fantanstic!For instance,Lieshi Park and Kaifu Temple. To summarize,I hope my friend have a happy trip.