2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear friend I am very gald that you will come to my hometown ,and i also know that it is your first time to china . As you know ,my hometown is zhejiang hangzhou ,all people know that west lake is famous ,so i'd like to take you to have a look . The west lake is not only beautiful but also have a lot of history,in this way ,you will have a chance to learn about the china'history .LeiFeng tower is very huge and tall ,in which there are have a wonderful story ,when you come china ,i must to tell you . To be honest ,i can't stop missing you ,hope you will have a good time in china .