2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中从句数量过少；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。

This table shows the learning and earning between men and women. As you can see from the table. The higher the degree earned more money and under equal education of men earned more than women. The women who has high school diploma earn the least that only $18648. The men who has master's degree earn the most that $47260. Men even degree lower than women, but earn more than women. Associate degree of men got almost as much as the women of the master's degree. Both men and women, master's degree earn money is almost twice as high school diploma. As far as I am concerned, the social has discrimination between men and women. Under the condition of the same men earn more than women forever. At the same time, the higher the degree earn more.