小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog. It is very fat. It is 9 years old. It is very cute but sometime it is very annoying. It has a yellow hair and big black eyes. Many people like it include works teachers mother and father. Because it is very cute！But others hate it. I don’t know why.