2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

With the science and technology's developed,more and more people begin to use the telephone.we can talk with others on the phone ,even that can we see each other on the screen, our life get more convenient . However ,the telephone takes some problems to our life . Many people waste mostly time on it ,such as when they were eating ,when they were walking ,even when they were crossing the street .we were addicted in it. Now,mostly people were busy with play it everyday .Our life get more awful and more dim. surely ,the phone took so many bad things to our life .Our time had been wasted ,our life had been influenced , our live get don't safety. All the things was being bad .we need to use it temperately . Just this ,our will be more good .