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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11035
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
用户的作文(系统评分56.5分
评语:

增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。

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Playing football is my most favourite sport. When I was a little child, I was shotted by a flying football. When I was playing the football in the sport class in the medium school, I kicked the football to one of my classmates' stomach. So I was shocked at that time. By that time, I don't like the football. By chance, I picked up a football on way home. Maybe," that's a chance to me." I told to myself. I can fight the fearness in my heart. I am always playing football with my classmates. I like football deeply. Now, my classmates and me always training and catching football . Bacham is my most favorite football celibirity.Some day I can become him as a professional football player.

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