Task Direction:
You will have a choice between two Issue topics. Each topic will appear as a brief quotation that states or implies an issue of general interest. Read each topic carefully; then decide on which topic you could write a more effective and well-reasoned response.
You will have 45 minutes to plan and compose a response that presents your perspective on the topic you select. A response on any other topic will receive a zero. You are free to accept, reject, or qualify the claim made in the topic you selected, as long as the ideas you present are clearly relevant to the topic. Support your views with reasons and examples drawn from such areas as your reading, experience, observations, or academic studies.
GRE readers who are college and university faculty will read your response and evaluate its overall quality, based on how well you do the following
consider the complexities and implications of the issue
organize, develop, and express your ideas on the issue
support your ideas with relevant reasons and examples
control the elements of standard written English.
You may want to take a few minutes to think about the issue and to plan a response before you begin writing. Be sure to develop your ideas fully and organize them coherently, but leave time to reread what you have written and make any revisions that you think are necessary.
Section Direction:
Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.
Question: "It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public."
文中词汇使用灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Dear Prof. Zhang, This is Wenhua Zuo from Southern University of Science and Technology (SUSTech). I got my B.S. and M.S. from Lanzhou Univerisy and Central China Normal University, respectively. I am working as a research assistant in SUSTech since July, 2016. During my last four years, I made a thorough grounding in energy storage field including Li/Na ion battery and supercapacitors. Until now, I published 8 (including 3 first authored). My first work of a hybrid binder-free supercapacitor was published in Scientific reports (Sci. Rep. 5, 7780, 2015). Very recently, my third work which discovered a new versatile aqueous electrode material for rechargeable metal-ion batteries (Li/Na/K/Mg/Ca/Sr/Ba/Al) was published in Energy