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2015年高考作文优秀范文:平凡工作

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要求:
  阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
  To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend ,painting the house or digging the garden。
  What is the reason, then? In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the Job they are doing .It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something !
  Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized, No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs。
  [写作内容]
  1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
  2. 以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法,内容包括:
  (1) 描述清洁工工作的艰辛;
  (2) 假如没有清洁工,环境会变得如何?
  (3) 你对平凡工作者的看法。
  [写作要求]
  1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
  2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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评语:

文章词汇表达丰富,不过请增加高级词汇的使用;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。

用户练习作文:

Sometimes we always say" No big, no deal". We're small for the world, but we can do our best do everything and try everything. If you're the gold, you may shining someday. Just look at the road we walk every, it's cleaned by the cleaners. You can hear the sound from the road when the cleaners are working at 6:00 in the winter, maybe you are sleeping in the comfortable bed. Everyday they must do it, their work make the world cleaner. If nobady do this, the world will be dirty. No younger people do it, because it's dirty and hard. So we must repect them who do this job. We can't drop things everywhere.

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