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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3950
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

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错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

From the table,we can get a conclusion what people's life expectancy had increased to sixty years old at 1990 fron fourty years old at 1960 and infant mortality had decreased to about one hundred deaths per 1000 births from two hundred deaths per 1000 births. I think the changes have these possible reasons.First,we have more and more good medical environment.If we get a sick,we are able to receive a timely treatment.Infants can also receive a good check,and confirm their health.Second,we have more and more good living conditions.We hve enough food to eat and clean place to live.We have a variety of ways to relax. These changes mean that our country will have more and more people.On the one hand,more people means greater productivity.On the other hand,more people means more competition.

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