小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

作者词汇基础较薄弱，要注意积累学术词汇，单词拼写要认真；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

my English techer is very severe,but she teach us very earnest.I have a little fear he,but most of the time I like her. my English is very poor before,my teacher very patience,she patient instruct me .now,my English have a huge progress,I really appreciate her. I hope her happy every day. my English techer is very severe,but she teach us very earnest.I have a little fear he,but most of the time I like her. my English is very poor before,my teacher very patience,she patient instruct me .now,my English have a huge progress,I really appreciate her. I hope her happy every day.