高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中从句的数量太少；过渡词和衔接词不饱和，文章行文较为流畅；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视。

"Our hometown is on the field of hope." someone is singing. Many years ago, I was lived in a small country. Many green trees growing, the rivers are clearly, many fishes can find in the river. But now people are growing the field of trees,grasses instead of rice. The life's style are more colorful and fashionable now. The quaity of life is improving. Many tall buildings and facturies have been built, the road and the street are more widly. So many cars driving the road. But the air