高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视。

"Our hometown is on the field of hope." someone is singing. Many years ago, I was lived in a small country. Many green trees growing, the rivers are clearly, many fishes can find in the river. But now people are growing the field of trees,grasses instead of rice. The life's style are more colorful and fashionable now. The quaity of life is improving. Many tall buildings and facturies have been built, the road and the street are more widely. You can see many cars driving on the road. But the air,the water, many ther things are polluted.