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如今很多动物处于濒危状态, 请你分析一下造成很多动物处于濒危状态的原因。作为中学生, 提出保护动物的倡议。.
作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。
We all love animals. But the number of the treasure animals is less than bofore. The animals are in danger. Their are many reasons cause this:less clean water, less live zone for them, the human's skilling. As a student in the middle school, "We should protect them." that's what I want to say. No deal, no kill.
