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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11299
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分59.0分
评语:

作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累还不够,拼写错误也要注意;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;衔接词较为不错,但文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

We will never leave the cell phone again. Because we take it by everywhere, everytime. When we get up every morning, we see the digital clock on our cell phone. We can listening music, learning English, playing games, buy something on line, chating and so on all this by cell phone. For example, someone will sold their legs for the IP 7. The e-commance giant Alibaba com. con provide many thing online, when you're working, or just a spare time, you can put one thing in your curt by your cell phone. But some kids in 5-8 years have a cellphone-watch. Maybe it's good for partents know what happening with their children, but it also cost nearly 300 RMB, it can infuence their attention.

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