2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

可适当增加几条从句；文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。

We will never leave the cell phone again. Because we take it by everywhere, everytime. When we get up every morning, we see the digital clock on our cell phone. We can listening music, learning English, playing games, buy something on line, chating and so on all this by cell phone. For example, someone will sold their legs for the IP 7. The e-commance giant Alibaba com con provide many thing online, when you're working, or just a spare time, you can put one thing in your curt by your cell phone. But some kids in 5-8 years have a cellphone-watch. Maybe it's good for parents know what happening with their children, but it also cost nearly 300 RMB, it can infuence their attention.