单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。
I have a good friend,she has a beautiful face,I always playing with her before she leaved. My friend is Alice,she living America now,i want to America see her,but America is so far,i missing her very much. I hope she is happy everyday,and she also miss me.Alice is my best friend.I always think that:she is indispensability in my life.