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错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Many parents can take their children to the famous colleges for a travel when they're in the middle or high school. there're Tinghua university, Beijing University, Nanjin University and so on. It's a spirit of wisdom, improve, technoligy. They are all young, they're the higth of the social. And the university is open, And the students in the university should learn subjects well, it's their mission. They should study hard, because not for themselves but for everyone go to the university. Not all the students can get a good job from the university. The uniersity is a small social, and students need suitable the social. It's not a important thing for the university can be a sopt. It depends on the students themselves.
