词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;衔接词较为不错,但文章结构不严谨。
Don't be afraid to refuse Most of people think it's very difficult to say "No" to others.because it not only hurt their friendship,but also made myself embarrassed.Now,let listening my voice. When others put something that we can'understand or accept.we should say "No". When friends ask for that we never do it,we should say "No" Anyway,We should help other try our best if respond to friends Someone feels embarrassed if refuse others .so they always tired but don't how to solve. While you meet the same situation,you not decline .you will feel very tired.and then if you not finish work.your friends maybe have a word with you . So,Don't afraid .Speak your opinion