句式变化多样;上下文衔接不自然;文中有较多拼写错误,用词太过单一。
If my foreign friend come to my hometown,i will take her to the kaifeng.Because kaifeng is the ancient city ahd went through many fighting .Now it's very beautifuil and make many peopel unforgetting ,it have much natrual signal so that many peopel come my hometown only want to see the special city.