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With the economy development decades of years in China, the tourism, one of a booming industry, is becoming a support industry of some historical cities which enhancing the incoming of the citizens, while there are different ideas which the people of the cities on tourism have and the dominant is worried about with dramatic increasing tourists who bring them with money and at the same, time the pollution of the invernment with them too. To my point, I don't think so. As the economy developed, the qualification of people who is euthusastic of journey have forstered. First, At present times, our people are educated with the public sense on envirnment protection. The only thing which the touring-target cities should do is regulating the guideline. Most of the tourist will obey them. Second, it is utmost to cope with the tiny numbers of tourists who are educated less in the public sense and their behavours of doing harm to the envirnment. The local goverment should establish a set of regulations to eliminate this kind of behavior, and certain punishments is necessary. Finally, as a civilized Chinese people, living in a country with great civilization history and many virtures, we should have the environment protection sense, and do our best the to protect environment, make our life comfortable.
