2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My foreign friends Nancy will come to Shanghai next week. I am very excited as she will come to my hometown. I will plan to bring her to visit Oriental Pearl and Eastern Nanjing Road. For Oriental Pearl, that is the standard construction in Shanghai. It has a long history. And there has many shops in Eastern Nanjiang Road and it nears to Bund. Hopes she will like it.