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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。
With China's economy development for decades of years, the tourism, one of a booming industries, is becoming a support industry of some historic cities, which enhances the incoming of the citizens, while there are different ideas which the people of the cities on tourism have and the dominant is worried about with dramatic increasing tourists who bring them the money and at the same time, the pollution of the environment with them too. To my point, I don't think so. As the economy developed, the qualification of people who are enthusiastic of the journey has been fostered. First, at present times, our people are educated with the public sense on environmental protection. The only thing which the touring-target cities should do is regulating the guideline. Most of the tourist will obey them. Second, it is utmost to cope with the tiny number of tourists who are educated less in the public sense and their behaviour of doing harm to the environment. The local government should establish a set of regulations to eliminate this kind of behavior, and certain punishments are necessary. Finally, as a civilized Chinese people, living in a country with great civilization history and many virtues, we should have the sense of environment protection, do our best the to protect our environment, and make our life comfortable.
