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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

These days there is a popular discussion about issue of judge a person by their appearance. The different civizens have a dissimilar idea.If it is wise to judge a person by the appearance?It is indefinitely not. From my view of piont.All of us hope to have a pretty face,just nobody enjoys a ugly one.However,that just can not depend on by ourselves,so do you feel occentric about judging apppearance?Firstly, if a pretty girl with sourness,that you look at her and admire her beautiful face."WOW" so sweet girl,you can do that one,two and so on days.Finally,you just can be felt ordinary.Meanwhile,she always make you in trouble,what will you choice? Secondly,nowdays,With the development of technogy and science,plastic surgery is so hot.It is so easy to make a small surgery to alter ones appearance.Of course,ornaments are also important in making up . Admittedly,altough a pretty appearance is important in communicate with other people of first impression.But no one wants to encounter with sourness of inner thought

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