2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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Sucess is a dream for people who want to be a great man.As we know,there are many ways to sucess for different people,but they all have some similiar points.On the way to sucess,holding a unchanging belief is very necessary for people.Diligent also a importan factor on the way to sucess.