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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

These days there is a popular discussion about issue of judge a person by their appearance. The different citizens have a dissimilar idea. If it is wise to lose rational judgement rather than judge a person by the appearance,?It is indefinitely not. From my point of view.All of us hope to have a pretty face,there is nobody enjoying an ugly one.However,just can not depend on by ourselves,so do you feel eccentric about judging appearance?First and foremost, if a pretty girl with sourness and you usually look at her and enjoy her beautiful face.You say“so sweet girl”all the time,then you can do that one,two and so on days.Finally,you just can feel ordinary and boring.Meanwhile,she always makes you in trouble,what will you choose? Secondly,nowadays,with the development of technology and science,plastic surgery is so hot.It is so easy to make a small surgery to alter ones appearance.Of course,ornaments are also important in making up . Admittedly,although a pretty appearance is important in communication with other people of first impression.But no one wants to encounter with sourness of inner thought

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