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in our daily life ,we can see many people have no plan for themselves,which is have no a extinct aim to be a meaningful life.A meaningful life is a vital for us because it can become a guard for us. How can we have a meaningful life?Many people agree a point that a meaningful life just have a clearing goal.However,is not true.A meaningful life is a action which you do everything for others or comforted by your heart.when you do what you had plan before,and finish it.you will feel achievement.and then,when you do what you can help others,you will feel you did a good job,which is benefit to others. therefore,if you want to have a meaningful life,you had to plan a meaningful goal,which can make you have a sense of achievement.futhermore,you had to keep it go no matter what will appened
