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We live in a wonderful word that we can see and listen kinds of things.As the same time,we know many things from our eyes and ears.Then,we don`t think deeply and make a decision about the things at once. In general,a lot of things are not what we think.We should not make up our mind before we go and find out what is going on.If we decide something only by means of our eyes or ears,we may make a mistake.For example,somethings after a lot of people`s mouth to your ear may have changed.Then you will be misled. So,we should not make a decision what we see or listen.
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