雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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nowadays, more and more people choose to travel to other countries because of the growth of income and rate of economy. at same time, air plane, train, and ferry are become more perfect than before, those transport lead people go out become much more convenient, cheap and fast. however, the trend of people travel out have a big effect on the economic growth and environment. for the advantage to travel outside, we must to discuss the influence of environment. in fact, to china, the number of population is too large to hard manage people protect environment especially when the holiday people plan to travel together. even, Beijing, the capital of china, can not manger and control people efficiency and effectively. people who without high quality will left some mark on the gate, wall in the interest places. what's more, cause of the lager population, during the holiday, it also become the term which happened accident frequently. for example, at the great wall, people would often find someone drop off from the wall because of crowded. when people choose to travel outside, that means the number of people travel inside will be reduce and the accident will be reduce. at same time, those people who might through out the rubbish or left mark on the wall will be decrease. however, it also bring some negative influence on the economic growth. to some places, like Tai an, yellow mountain, wu zhen, and wei yuan, which are traveling city. to those city, the majority income of people from tourists. when people choose to travel aboard, might be influence the income and live level of those cities. in summary, people travel aboard will bring both benefit and negative influence on the county. Government should try to find a good way to change the situation to help protect environment instead of rely on reduce people's show up. at same time, government also should help those cities develop their own business replace in the traveling.