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In china,parents always try their best to help their children ,even make crucial determation for their children,ignore what the children truely want,and theny believe what they have done benefit thechildren.as a result,the development and education of children yield to parental willness. If parents decide to sign up for their children to take an extra class,which rise the chance that the chidren are admitted by famous university,they will insist their decision rather than children's interests.Nonetheless,parents may respect children's advice and more focus on children's thinking when they make decisions. It is the good fact that parents in china pay more attention to children's education.However,they ought to learn how to balance the relationship between parents and the children from american parents referring education.
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