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Ladies and Gentlemen, First at all, Please allow me to express the most heartfelt welcome to all of you on behalf of our English Club. We have been looking forward to see you for long. It is a wonderful day today. Now I would like to brief introduct my club to you since I want to leave the most wonderful for you to discover. Our club, Organizing various activities regularly catering for the needs of participants, is well-known among many English learners. If you want to meet native English speakers, Please join us. If you want to speak English not only accurately but also fluently, Please join us. If you want to discover the most attractive aspect in English, Please join us. I do hope that you enjoy your journey of English study with us. Thank you! Sincerely yours Lucy