一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨。

I got up at 6:00, after i eat breakfast i went downstairs. I looked mother was washing clothes, "let me help you" i said happily. My mother smiled and then told me "you should clean your room". Mother was cooking when i already clean my room. I want to learn how to cook so i remembered mother do. In the afternoon, i played ping-pong with my friend. I had a great time today.