新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。

Hi David, I am glad to hear that you will come to china to learn chinese,chinese is very useful. but is hard to learn chinese. It's important to remember more chinese word,you must read,writing and listen more,you can watch and listen some china’s TV show or radio to practice your listening. You could learn chinese not only from book but also around people of you. Any question,please don’t hesitate to let me know. Looking for you to come LANZHOU. CHENQUAN