高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。

Hello, everyone, I'm Alice. It's my pleasur to introduce Nanjin to you. It's a beautiful and history city. There're ten perid in the Nanjin in history. It's located in southeast of China, in Jiangsu Provience. Population is 5 million. It's more than 2,400 years history. There're many famous top travel, such as Xuanwu Lake, the temple of the , the stone city. Then you can see many facturies and tall buildings. And you can go to the River of the Qinhua. So many beautiful lights and shops beside the river. Have a good day.