高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Hello, everyone, I'm Alice. Welcome to our city. It's my pleasure to introduce Nanjing to you. It's a beautiful and history city. It was once as the capital of more than ten dynasties in history. It's located in southeast of China, the capital of Jiangsu Provience. Population is 5 million. It's more than 2,400 years history. There're many famous top travel, such as Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple , the Stone City. Then you can see many moden factories and tall buildings. And you can go to the River of the Qinhua. So many beautiful lights and shops beside the river. Have a good day.