文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用高级词汇;从句使用量不足;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Expo 2010 Shanghai China will be a great event to explore the full potential of urben life in the 21st century. It starts from 1st, May to 30th, Oct. It's good new for all the visitors. The topic of this explore is "Better city, better life". Then we can discuss about the environment for the human beings in the new century, the lifestyle, how can we work conditon. It attracts 200 countries attend the explore and international organizations and 70 million visitors. It's a chance for me to open my eyes and learn technology. And you also can be a volunteer to help others.