高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者词汇量积累不错，高级词汇积累还不够，拼写错误也要注意；结构较为严谨，文中衔接成分很少。

Everyone has hometown. What does your hometown like? When I was a child, my hometown was a beautiful place. My hometown was colourful. The little town was always sourrounded by many trees which was green in spring and summer and yellow in autrum. A river circled across the town, which had clear and clean water. At that time, the building was old and simple,the road was narrow and rough. The people worked hard but were polverty. Now, buildings are higher and higher. Verious cars run through the wide road. Factories are more and more.The atmosphere got bad,and you rarely see blue sky. Trees got less and less,fishes have not be seen in the river. An urgent thing need to do immediately is treat with pollution.