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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17583
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
评语:

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇基础不错,能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇,但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

I do not totally support this agreement that snap judgments can never be trusted. I always believed that everthing has different sides depending on our aspect to treat it. Snap judgment can be dangerous. It is the common sense that if we have not think through something and made a decision in a rush, it always end up with so many troubles. Expecially for the important relationship with others, many unhappy marrige are juat caused by a intensive mothion and had not thought about the concequence. But sometimes snap judgment can be a savior for many people.Like in some emergency, if you waste time on thinking, you may lose the best chance. somtimes Our natural affect will lead us to do the right choice. So it always not very corective to say the snap judgent can never be trusted.

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