正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中用词稍显贫乏;语言不流畅。
Today is the summer vacation. I'm very happy. Now I'm going to go fishing.But mother doesn't allow me to. So I just play computer games. But mother doesn't play computer games. I'm very anger. It's a pity that can't. I can only sleep. It is time when I wake up I found that be