用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句的使用,注意几处句子错误;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词。
Now day,there is a hot debate on reading.As for such a question,different people hold different views. Some believe that reading should selectively.because everyone has different majors or hobbies.If you read some books which help your major knowledge get stronger,you can catch the top of your dream quickly. Whine others argue of reading extensively.For the reason that person who is full of knowledge ought to know a little about everything. As for me,I am in favor of the second.Now,It's a information boom century.Provided that we only reading selectively,just know something about our major,other thing not at all understand.If so,we can't adopt this society.So,I support reading extensively.