2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In my opinion,if my foreign friends visit my home,I will take her to go to Wujiashan where a famous place in my hometown at first.My hometown name is yingshan.I have been went to Wujiashan severa times in my life.Wudangshan,which is a special and grand mountain.In fact,it not only a mountain,but also a good park.If traveling here,you will see all kinds of views.It has the most highiy altitude in My province.That point also a reason what it is famous for.I love Wudangshan,because it has clean water,several plant,betiful views,and so on.I believe that wy foreign friend must like going to there.