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2012年考研英语作文真题:遇到挫折的态度

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:12浏览次数:8275
要求:
题目 看图作文(题目自拟)
说明 write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分

  这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
  这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
  在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。

用户的作文(系统评分90.5分
评语:

文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

As the picture description, there are two men when their milk bottle dropped on the ground, the different information is expressed on their face, the left one disappointing and dissatisfying and the right one pick it with smiles. It's noted that the cartoonist tries to express his view that optimism and objection on the disadvantaging situation are necessary. To my point, optimistic attitudes in life and in work place are utmost. Not all things in our life are pleased and gratified, with dissatisfying, dismissing, failing and some time even experiencing the serious loss in our body and health, it is the real life. In consequence, the optimism and non pessimism when we are in trouble is required. For one thing, the pessimistic mentality which is harmful to our health, is a kind of way of wasting time to discover an effective strategy and way to cope with the loss; the correct and effective method is actively seeking the available resources and helpful information for saving loss and unnecessary damages. Secondly, easygoing and open-minded people are easier to make friends who can supply and introduce novelty and helpfulness advice and precious suggestion, and make their fellows comfortable and confident and also to themselves. At the same time, they keep enough confidence and take optimistically measures to all the difficulties which can be not overcome by the average people. It is obvious that the difficulties in the life and study and work are not the deadly diseases like cancer, we must have the encouragement to cope and bravely and optimistically face to them. Please impress into your mind, there always the methods are more than difficulties.

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