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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中高级词汇不足。
In my opinion, if my foreign friends visit my home, I will take her to go to Wujiashan where a famous place in my hometown at first. My hometown name is Yingshan. I have been went to Wujiashan several times in my life. Wudangshan, which it is a special and grand mountain. In fact, it is not only a mountain, but also a good park. If traveling here, you will see all kinds of views. It has the most highiy altitude in My province. That point also a reason what it is famous for. I love Wudangshan, because it has clean water, several plant, betiful views, and so on. I believe that wy foreign friend must like going to there.
