高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇量积累不错，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

I've been living in a small village since I was a little girl. I remembered that there was a forest behind my small hut. So that my elder brother always took me going into it for exploring with his friends. As there were so many big trees. Some of them had produced wild fruits which we all loved to taste, stweety. My brother enjoyed playing hide and seek with his friends. I preferred to catch fish and shrimps with my net and bucket. I remembered once I slipped into the water when I stepped on a wet stone. I was extremely scared because I could not swim. Then I shouted for help. My brother immediately ran towards me and saved me up. I really loved the green environment and fresh air during the period of my childhood. Now I am an adult and still live in this district, but it has been a great change. All the trees behind my home disappeared and replaced by several skyscrapers. My family also moved in one small unit of them because of my home returning to Government for reconstructure. In the past, there were so many trees and a river surrounding the area. and now in front of my windows is two huge roads with busy traffic. As a great number of industrial flats emerge in recent. The air pollution is getting worse. It make me very ill. Although the economic of my city shoots up rapidly, I still wish I could live in an area as my child.