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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；文中用词灵活多样，但要注意增加使用高级词汇；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒。
In my opinion, if my foreign friends visit my home, I will take her to go to Wujiashan where a well-know place in my hometown at first. My hometown name is Yingshan. I have been done to Wujiashan several times in my life, so i can introduce it to my friend in detail. Wudangshan, which it is a special and grand mountain. In fact, it is not only a mountain, but also a good park. If you traveling here, you will see all kinds of views. It has most highly altitude in my province. That point also a reason what it is famous for. I love Wudangshan, because it has clean water, several plants, fresh air,blue sky,beautiful views, and so on. I believe that wy foreign friend must like going there.
