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作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩。
In my opinion, if my foreign friends visit my home, I will take her to go to Wujiashan where a famous place in my hometown at first. My hometown name is Yingshan. Now I will state my reasons. First, I have been done to Wujiashan several times in my life, so I can introduce it to my friend in detail. Second, Wudangshan, which it is a special and grand mountain I has ever seen before. In fact, it is not only a mountain, but also a good park. There is good infrastructure. If you traveling here, you will see all kinds of views. It has most highly altitude in my province. That point also a reason what it is famous for. I love Wudangshan, because it has clean water, several plants, fresh air, blue sky, artistic views, and so on. I believe that wy foreign friend must like going there.
