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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒。
In my opinion, if my foreign friends visit my home, I will take her to go to Wujiashan where a famous place in my hometown at first. My hometown name is Yingshan. Now I will state my reasons. First, I have been done to Wujiashan several times in my life, so I can introduce it to my friend in detail. Second, Wudangshan, which it is a special and grand mountain I has ever seen before. In fact, it is not only a mountain, but also a good park. There is good infrastructure. If you traveling here, you will see all kinds of views. It has most highly altitude in my province. That point also a reason what it is famous for. At last I want to express that I love Wudangshan, because it has clean water, several plants, fresh air, blue sky, artistic views, and so on. I believe that my foreign friend will like there as the same as me.
