Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但拼写方面要再接再厉;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
The picture shows that a pair of couple is communicate with their parents on the computer. Along with the development of the Internet, more and more people is used to using the computer for communicationg with friend and relatives,even the stranger. As for this phenomenon, different people have different appoint. Some people insist on that its convenient for us to communiment. And Internet can be decrease distence betwwen ourself and friend and relatives. But others think that we should face to face. Because,it make us more the intimacy, and get mercy off themself . In my opinion, I believed that we should come back realistic life to concerned about our friend and relatives. It is more actualily more than subjunctive world.