2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇使用比较灵活。
With the development of information technology, computers have already been involved into almost every aspect of our life. It is undoubted that computers bring in great convenience to us. However, sometimes computers can also lead us into great trouble. So we should make proper use of computers. Here are some reasons why we ought to avoid over-depending on computers. The first is that some students have deserted their studies as a result of losing themselves into computer games. In addition, if computers were attacked by hackers, we would suffer heavy loss, for the important information may be changed, even lost, and even worse situation may happen, that is , the secret of our government would give away which may do great harm to our country. Furthermore, the expense on buying computers and paying for the Internet will add to our economic burden. Therefore we should use computersbu to the best advantagest not to over depend on them.